yoshiblue1733's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Bad Rant]

Huh?

Things to improve on:
-Storyline (No real story here, unless that was intended)
-Sound (Could not here much)
- Music (No form of music witnessed in this clip)
- Animations (Lack of animations)
- Background (Lack of detail, aside from the cobweb)
- Too short

Things I enjoyed:
- Lip Sync (Very well done)

Overall, it could have and still can be re-touched. A lot of things are incomplete and/or missing. Since this was for one of your classes, some of these things are intentional so nothing can be done about it.

Honest try.

Forefox responds:

Thank you. I respect your review.
-Storyline (None intended)
-Sound (My mic doesn't record well)
-Music (none intended)
-Animation (The only necessary was the lip syncing. Class assignment)
-Background (Ran out of time before project was due)
-The assignment was not supposed to be more than 10 to 15 seconds long.

[O Canada]

O' Canada!

Aside from the random stuff going on within the film, it was quite decent. 1 star gone for little to no storyline.

Other then that keep up the good work!

Thundaboom responds:

lol, yeah. I was expecting people not getting the story line. Some other things in there show canadian objects.

Also, I should've made a story board for that. Thanks for reviewing.