Things to improve on:
- Storyline (Unless you intended this to be random)
- Some form of loading bar (I thought it didn't work at first, but I decided to let it run for a second and sure enough, it was only because it was loading)
- Animations (A little choppy but a little touch up and it would be much better
- Too short
Things I enjoyed:
- Sounds (Fit the scene)
- Background (It is an interesting background)
6/10. Four stars off for reasons stated above.
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