yoshiblue1733's Reviews

[A Bad Rant]

Huh?

Things to improve on:
-Storyline (No real story here, unless that was intended)
-Sound (Could not here much)
- Music (No form of music witnessed in this clip)
- Animations (Lack of animations)
- Background (Lack of detail, aside from the cobweb)
- Too short

Things I enjoyed:
- Lip Sync (Very well done)

Overall, it could have and still can be re-touched. A lot of things are incomplete and/or missing. Since this was for one of your classes, some of these things are intentional so nothing can be done about it.

Honest try.

Forefox responds:

Thank you. I respect your review.
-Storyline (None intended)
-Sound (My mic doesn't record well)
-Music (none intended)
-Animation (The only necessary was the lip syncing. Class assignment)
-Background (Ran out of time before project was due)
-The assignment was not supposed to be more than 10 to 15 seconds long.

[shootin star]

1ryanmackey1,

Things that could use improvements:
%u2022 Could use some animations, I only believe I saw just a few movie clips in this particular piece.
%u2022 Needs a storyline (Unless you intended for this to be random)
%u2022 Theme song starts playing over itself after the credits (1 minute into the credits without replaying, all I hear is a scream of 5 of the same song playing at different intervals

Things I enjoyed:
%u2022 The sound track (Although only one song, it was a good song)
%u2022 Originality (Whether soneone has done this before or not, which I don't suppose so, this is the first time I've seen this video)

For your first attempt, it was a good start. 7/10. Three stars off for the three improvements I have suggested to you.

[O Canada]

O' Canada!

Aside from the random stuff going on within the film, it was quite decent. 1 star gone for little to no storyline.

Other then that keep up the good work!

Thundaboom responds:

lol, yeah. I was expecting people not getting the story line. Some other things in there show canadian objects.

Also, I should've made a story board for that. Thanks for reviewing.

[TM3 - Almost up]

Very well done

You should be proud of yourself for making this, although there are thousands upon thousands of audio songs on Newgrounds, only a select few of them are enjoyable. I do agree with PersonaUnfound, this piece was quite simple but I enjoyed it for, simply that.

Life seems to fly by at an increasing rate now adays, been awhile since I've heard, seen, or done something simple and easy.

Just enjoyed
xP

Cheers!

[DoYouKnowWhereYouLeftMyMemStik]

LMAO

Sorry bud but I am going to have to give this a 1, although after reading all of the reviews while listening to this, could not stop laughing hahahaha.

For next time, try not to use your own voice (I am assuming you voiced all of that) because it usually never works for .. well, anyone. And also try to mix it up a bit besides different vocal cords.

Pretty much the same thing through the entire song, but you really had me laughing.

Cheers!

benchesh responds:

I didn't know the third love scene actually recycled footage from the first. I'll have a word with the editor.

[neva goona let you go]

twickz,

Wow, that really hit me as I followed along with the lyrics. Nothing like this has happened to myself nor anyone close to me, so I am unable to relate but this song still got to me.

I could only imagine having to go through this. Really haven't quite heard this type of song on Newgrounds. Well done, you did a marvelous job at congregating and preserving the feel of the song.

twickz responds:

hey man im glad you liked it !